"Storybook" Critique Session

This is the last critique/tutorial session. This means that this module is coming to an end soon……… = (
As usual, the tutorial begins with no “volunteers”. He-he! When it’s my group’s turn, we are once again “awarded” with some feedbacks & suggestions. For example, the need to enhance/develop the storyline further, and to improve on the “drawings” for the characters. All of these need a lot of improvements.
Besides that, the layout of the book, the printing of the book and all the necessary “measurements” need to be improved so as to “develop” a better “storybook”. Phew! Now then I realized that the process of developing a book is so….. “Challenging!” Ha-ha!
All the Best for everyone! =)