This is my 4th tutorial/critique lesson for NM2208. Attending the tutorial lessons to me means that I’m always learning to improve my drawings or designing concepts & to expose to many different ways of thinking & concepts from others. Today’s lesson is on “Visual Story”. To begin with, we were asked to display out our design/”story” so that every one of us will have the time to look through. “Feedbacks or Comments”, which have already become the main point or focus in our tutorial lessons, is still “surviving strong” Ha-ha!
As usual, my “Visual Story” is also “awarded” with some feedbacks. Such as, how to make the focus of a photograph becomes more prominent & outstanding. This is the main point that is lacking in mine. For example, the “key” in my 4th photograph should be the main focus rather than taking a full photograph of that moment/instance. This way will give the audience a clearer view of the “story”.
Another point for me to take note is the layout of how the photographs should be taken. There should be a consistent layout throughout the whole “story”; i.e. all photographs should be in “Portrait” layout if 1 appears to be in that layout. Wow! This lesson really benefits me! He-he!
Thanks, everyone! I’m still working on the improvements. Please feel free to post any messages/comments in my “Drawing Lounge”. I really appreciate that.
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