The 3rd Critique Session

It’s tutorial time for NM2208! Today, we will be having the next critique session. That’s on our 2nd assignment, “Making Images Talk”. As usual, most of us come up with many creative ideas. Throughout the lessons, there will definitely be some feedbacks. It looks as if our ideas won’t “run out of ammunitions”. Ha-ha! =) There are 2 drawings that leave me with a very deep impression. One of it is the windmill. Although the drawing/sign or abstract is very simple, it really portrays out what it really signifies. The other is on a type of flowers. Maybe someone may thinks that a simple representation of the flower using just simple drawing techniques doesn’t look good in the design point of view. But, I feel is that the abstract really portrays out what it really signifies. My design is also “awarded” with some comments. I only remember vaguely that my drawing is very simple and if there’s no outline casing given to the 2 simple shapes, a triangle & a square, no one is able to figure out that my abstract signifies or represents a remote controller. Hmm….. I think I can improve my drawing by drawing the outline or casing for the remote controller smaller in size, so that the abstract will look more proportional. I really hope to receive some more comments from anyone to improve my concept on what is really a “sign”. Thanks! =)